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:XD: i wish there was a comic book noise dictionary...

veen: "v-ee-n." noise used for fast approaching, running, chasing, glowing, or a whiz of energy.

also see: zoom, vmmm, and woosh

antonyms: creep, stumble, sneak, tiptoe, creeek and stop


anyway, because i never do things in order, and i just had a blast making this page, this is 2 of 3.

:star::star::star::star::star:manga tutorial i made using this drawing HERE! [link]
enjoy!
:lmao:
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:icontineyli:
Tineyli Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing..
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:iconsaotomeyuromachi:
SaotomeYuromachi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010
I saw this and I was just like "Aw, dude... AW,DUDE!!!"
Amazing battle sequence, keep up the good work!
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you! it was fun to draw :)
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:iconsyntheticmessiah:
syntheticmessiah Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009
Klessy, is this your Dream world dreamy thingy? Looks fantastic jebus
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
something else. :) i thought less about this one :B
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:iconshadowcatgc:
shadowcatGC Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
Why have I not faved this yet? -_- THANKS DA, THANKS FOR HIDING ALL THE ART FROM PEOPLE I WATCH. THANKS.
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:iconwraskye:
wraskye Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009   Photographer
Needs more action lines!

Also I like 'shoom'. In the first panel it almost looks like the dude is crying. The tutorial to this is great too. Nice work!
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
EVERYTHING needs more action lines! :D especially bleach :XD: thanks!
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:iconcaramelapples:
CaramelApples Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're really good at action scenes! It looks really good! I like veen thought, it has a certain "ring" to it! :D
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
:D thanks!
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:iconcaramelapples:
CaramelApples Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome!
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:iconpalehorseapocalypse:
PaleHorseApocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Veen, huh? You could have also gone with "fssh", but that looks dumb. You could have also used the good old "tmp tmp tmp" for some footsteps.
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
true true. i do love "tmp tmp tmp" i was considering using it. :D
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:iconpalehorseapocalypse:
PaleHorseApocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
But you also have to consider the background. "tmp tmp tmp" is usually used when someone is running across wood or hard surfaces like stone or tile. Whereas your background suggested an outside location such as a field or mountainous terrain. So, I think you probably went with the best sound effect word. :)
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
hurray! you've thought hard about this! :) (i never considered what it would sound like outside!)
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:iconpalehorseapocalypse:
PaleHorseApocalypse Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I tend to over think things. I pay way too much attention to the small stuff.
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:iconpuccoon:
Puccoon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconyesvictoryplz: Amazing!
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:iconelizamoonchild:
ElizaMoonchild Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
OMG! What happens next!?
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:iconmsmojorisin:
MsMojorisin Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Unfortunately, there is still no one good comic sound effect for a fart. Frrnt? Poot? Pllllblblblblb? The mystery still remains!
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
pffpfpfpbbbftt is usually used. :)
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:iconscapularemix:
ScapulaRemix Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
I liekd the part when the red guy was like "veen"
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:icontavroast:
tavroast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Student Interface Designer
love the colors and can;t wait to see the tutorial.
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:iconcataclysm-x:
Cataclysm-X Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Actionlines are awesome.
I wonder who's going to win this battle :D
Can't wait for page 3!
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
:D thanks! you know..your user name has action lines because you're a beta tester :iconiloveitplz: you win 50 eattoast approval points! level up!
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:iconcataclysm-x:
Cataclysm-X Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Yay! :D
*plays victory tune*
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:iconmygothiclover:
MyGothicLover Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
Here's a list: [link]
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
:D nice.
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:iconmygothiclover:
MyGothicLover Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
welcome ^^
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:iconnightmareknight:
Nightmareknight Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Can't wait for page 3! :D
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
what about one? :XD: thanks
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:iconnightmareknight:
Nightmareknight Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
One, too... three!

:iconpetergriffinplz:
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:iconfiredragoness:
FireDragoness Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
You're officially my favourite artist ever o.o
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
:iconiloveitplz: thanks! :D
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:iconmshfar:
MSHFAR Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice ^^
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:iconfriendswithspiders:
FriendsWithSpiders Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That second panel is epic. :D

I love your traditional comic-ing skills. ^^
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks!
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:iconbloppyblue:
bloppyblue Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
LOL "veen"! Haha, nice find though. It's better than SWOOSH or ZIP! xD

As always, very pretteh :D Hope you get a tutorial out if you have time xD
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
i'll try to get to it today, but it's very busy at eattoast headquarters! :)
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:iconbloppyblue:
bloppyblue Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
awesome :D take your time lol, no rush ^^
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:iconjenkristo:
JenKristo Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
WOW. That second panel, especially wow.
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
:iconohjoyplz: makes me more excited for the next project. OvO
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:iconfrozenfiredragon:
frozenfiredragon Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
Veen is a great onomatopoeia XD (I don't know if I spelled that correctly ._.; ) As is 'Shooom'


And damn, this is still amazing. That was some epic weapon-summoning on the Angel's part, and the demon still just looks amazing in general. All the strong, bold colours in this are so lovely to look at, and there's just so much detail and general prettiness it's amazing ;o;
If you finished this, and printed the pages into a book, I'd totally buy it.
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:iconfrozenfiredragon:
frozenfiredragon Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
If it went longer than 3 pages I should say XD Since three pages doesn't make much of a book.

Otherwise I suppose I could settle for just purchasing prints of all three 8/
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
all comic noises are!!! they're fun to try to spell out too. you really look like an idiot doing it:XD: thanks so much!! maybe it'll turn into something one day. :)
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:iconfrozenfiredragon:
frozenfiredragon Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
Yes, I actually noticed that when trying to figure out sound effects for the OCT I entered a while ago XD I spent forever just trying to think, "What is a good noise for being smashed against a tree? And other such ridiculous things.
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:iconmuggle-chick:
muggle-chick Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing, as usual!
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:iconthunderwolfang:
ThunderWolfang Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Epic! XD
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:iconrheatoriesoto:
RheaTorieSoto Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
XDD
Veen.
A comic book dictionary would be cool.
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:iconeattoast:
EatToast Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
:XD: yeah! i want one!
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:iconrheatoriesoto:
RheaTorieSoto Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
>_>
We should make one...
I think veen would be my favourtie...other than "doom"
I mean...seriously. I loved that one "doom" in Bleach where it took up TWO WHOLE PAGES! It was great. Good times, good times.
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