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But seriously, The artwork is fantastic! I Loved the cover page and the way you broke the spirit bottle was really cool! But I gotta say, my favorite part in these two pages is the panel on the top left of page 2, the little girl listening to her parents fight! The expression on her face is SO SAD! *sniff* Not to suggest that the other expressions aren't good ((I love all of their faces)) but I like her, I really like her character... and I will be going to tell jenkristo just that ^^. I also admire how you have her twisting her toes! A lot of people don't pay a lot of attention to such things. But Excellent form, I must say. Keep up the excellent work!
and if it is added on the computer, how do you know how big the text bubbles should be, (the text bubble space looked hand drawn in there, and i was wondering if you ever ran out of space to type in the lines or ever just had too much space left over)
great comic page, btw, cant wait to see the rest
and icould hear them scraming in my head......not nice for my internal ears....